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February  2004

To See the "Softer Side of Sears", Avoid Jargon or PowerPoint with This Retail Exec.

If there’s any doubt that the business world today is seeking simpler, plainspoken presentations, you need look no further than Sears executive Bill Bass.  Bass’s rampages against Sears’ PowerPoint and Jargon were graphically documented in a recent article in the Wall Street Journal.

Bass, who took over the Sears internet business after the retail giant acquired his old company Lands’ End, has been a vocal critic of Sears’ formalized and somewhat jargon-filled presentation style.

For example Bass fumed at the Sears formality during a recent meeting, according to the Journal article. Employees were hashing out a plan to begin selling apparel online this year -- a major effort for the company. According to Mr. Bass, one employee said, "We've been out interfacing with stakeholders to obtain consensus." Mr. Bass snapped back: "Do you know what you just said? Normal people don't talk like that!"

Mr. Bass also complained about Sears colleagues who seem more obsessed with making PowerPoint slides than making decisions. At another recent meeting about shipping rates, he says a Sears employee gave a presentation with nine slides. When Mr. Bass grumbled, he says he was told: "This is good. It was 45 slides, and we got it down to nine."

People Rely Too Much on PowerPoint

At Speechworks, we are not anti-PowerPoint.  But we agree with Bass that people rely on it too much.  In a 30-minute presentation, you should have no more than about eight slides.  And you should limit the information to no more than a couple of short bullet points.

We urge our clients to remember that the most important visual aid is the presenter.   Slides should reinforce and support your points.  But they shouldn’t become your entire presentation.

And Jargon Can Make You Look Stupid

We certainly agree that jargon can be a real problem.  Indeed, a study done by a British consulting firm found that jargon is misused 20 percent of the time. Now if you’re using a buzzword wrong, what is the person listening going to think?  They’re going to think that you don’t know what you’re talking about. 

So minimize your jargon and your PowerPoint.  It might help you connect better with your listeners.  It certainly will help keep you from a tongue lashing at Sears.

Thanks to Beth Souther of Kurt Salmon Associates for alerting us to this article in the Wall Street Journal.

At Speechworks we help our clients learn how to give presentations that connect with the audience.  If you’re interested in becoming a great communicator give us a call at 404-266-0888 or check out our website at www.speechworks.net